A poem in creativity moonlike luny too perhaps.ByLH.


 

With a face almost like

The crescent of

The new moon,

Will look

Like if,

One

Had

To

Have

One,

Taken

Right away

By

some

 one

A millionaire perhaps,

Away in a space ship

 really big,

Right away

to now, which is a full moon?

 

 

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 8, 2009

    sorry

    TRIOND HAS distorted it

    unknowingly

    the poem was written in a crescent form

    sad

  • ceegirl on Oct 8, 2009

    all i can say is wow

  • oldster on Oct 10, 2009

    Shame about the shape–Very innovative.

  • Olivia Van Logum on Oct 10, 2009

    Very good, very artistic, even though it may not have come out exactly how you wanted – I knew straight away the effect you were trying to achieve. Genius!

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