Some time spent with a perfect gentleman-part one.

Trying to write about our day,

Hope no one thinks wrong to say,

As it kept popping up in my mind,

Your lips on mine did want to find,

Tall, Gray hair, well, whats there,

Coffee at Starbucks,  we did share,

Open the door, pull out my chair,

Constantly in my eyes, you did stare,

I felt as if did, babble on a bit much,

In reality your hand, I wanted to touch,

You did listen, as spoke every single word,

Told me enjoyed, make sure I was assured,

We shared some laughs, as we did talk,

Decided drive to park, to go for a walk,

You followed me in my car,

Am thankful it was not too far,

We got out and began, up the small hill,

Was a slight breeze, so of course slight chill,

The park was so quiet, seems only me and you,

Poem bit long, so will write another to continue…

~California Dreamer@07/09

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  • Ai0no801 on Jul 3, 2009

    i love these guys drinks…the best…like the vanilla one..

  • Joie Schmidt on Jul 3, 2009

    Very nice*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Francois Hagnere on Jul 4, 2009

    I found this excellent, bravo my friend! please continue.
    Very best wishes,
    François

  • rizzei on Jul 4, 2009

    wow that’s a nice poem..good read:)

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