The death of their soul mate, can cause great pain to those the brought forth into this world.

My Mother, My Love

                She cared for me through precious days

She tolerated me during teenage years

                She became my friend as motherhood arrived

We love each other, as long as things were fine

                And then

The wheel of life changed

                Dad was now gone

Alone she chose to handle it all

                Confused and scared she never shared

Until now…………
On a trail, all alone, but you and I. My mother, My love.

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                I must force the issue

Take her out of her comfort zone

                And mine too

What will it take to make her understand?

                Will I ever succeed?

Mommy I am all alone, once my hero

                Now you see me as the enemy

Trust is gone, too much pain

                The mother I love

Is she gone forever?!

               

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  • Eunice Tan on Oct 27, 2011

    Me too, still have not found another love which is equal to my mother’s

  • Rosettaartist1 on Oct 27, 2011

    Nice poem

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 27, 2011

    Mother love and such a good poem

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 27, 2011

    Oh, that’s sad. I lost my mother several years ago but I still find myself thinking about the laughs we had together. That was after I was grown, though.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 28, 2011

    That is so sad. I do hope that one day you will regain the wonderful relationship you had.

  • FX777222999 on Oct 28, 2011

    Make the first move to regain the bond between you and your mother.

  • PR Mace on Oct 31, 2011

    My mother changed after the death of my father. She became a bitter women and finally drove me away from her. She passed away in 2007 on my first granddaughter’s birthday. There are times I feel she even did that to hurt me. I remember times when we were close, we talked and laughed. I wish she hadn’t changed. I will pray for you and your mother that you can regain your relationship.

  • Donna Brace on Nov 5, 2011

    I am here for you always and forever …

  • yes me on Nov 11, 2011

    Hope things change for the better cheers Elizabeth

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