What inspires you?

Be my muse.

Let me paint a picture,

of you with my words

In my mind,

I began to outline

Words and each word

viewed by readers,

flowing eyes,

various burst of colors.

Let me write a story of,

the person you are to me.

The main character in a painting,

I created for all to see.

Pen which slowly writes,

words of written art.

On a blank white canvas,

I will write your story,

from the very start.

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Comments (7)
  • Darla Cooke on Nov 16, 2009

    Very good poem!

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 16, 2009

    I like the sentiment, but aren’t the writing and the painting on the canvas a mixed metaphor. I noticed it while reading and it distracted me.

  • Petalm on Nov 16, 2009

    Good work.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 16, 2009

    That was just lovely.Thanks.I think I just found my muse :)

  • Snooky on Nov 16, 2009

    Im waiting write me up it should only take a post it note lol

  • Themax on Nov 16, 2009

    very nice poem,Thanks :)

  • chitragopi on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice expressions.

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