What ever GOD has given to us, we should accept and enjoy ,every one has it’s own destiny but the fact remains, east or west our home is the ” best ” ….

God , I am not happy with you ,

You gave  me  poor parents , small house , small rooms ,

Small garden , that too out of the city ,

Why you didn’t  give me a big house near big markets ,

Rich parents …….

I preyed to GOD , and GOD is great ,

GOD heard  my request and shifted me in a rich house ,

Big  drawing room , bedroom , washroom and  every where mirrors and curtains ,

every thing covered , neat and clean and no dust at all.

 big super markets nearby and so many cars , so many servants and my new rich parents ,

Few days passed , I enjoyed like a king ,

breakfast , lunch , dinner and shopping ,

watching T.V. , listening music and long drive in cars , that’s all ,

soon i realized , my life has become mechanical ,

I have lost my ‘ life ‘ here 

i miss my parents , my sweet bed full  of sweet dreams ,

I miss the fresh air and morning sun rays of the small window in my bed room ,

I miss the early morning chirping of birds in my small garden ,

I miss my puppy and my many  friends with whom i use to play  so many games ,

I miss my mother’s  love and father’s advice ,

 i miss blue sky ,  stars , and taking bath in the rains ,

GOD please help me , i want to go home , I want my world back ,

I preyed to GOD , GOD  is great ,

GOD accepted my preyers  , and i am back home , in my small beautiful world ,

I am with my parents , friends and my puppy ,

There are tears in my eyes , Tears convey just one message ,

‘ EAST OR WEST YOUR HOME IS THE BEST ‘

What ever GOD has given to you , just accept it and enjoy…

What about you ?

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  • megamatt09 on Jan 19, 2012

    Very nice.

  • yes me on Jan 19, 2012

    Liked it cheers for the share here

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jan 19, 2012

    Lovely lines my friend. Catchy title too.

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 19, 2012

    We should be grateful for what we have. Like pastor Joel Osteen says, God is a good God and we can’t have a poverty mentality. God wants to promote us, God wants to bless us and provide us with abundance so we can live comfortably

  • Eunike on Jan 19, 2012

    God will listen the prayer

  • LCM Linda on Jan 19, 2012

    Learn to appreciate the things around us, we will be richer automatically.

  • girishpuri on Jan 20, 2012

    thanks to all

  • ittech on Jan 20, 2012

    nice MSG

  • indianwriting on Jan 20, 2012

    i m reminded of the song by adnan sami ” mujhko bhi tho lift kara dey…gaadi bungla motor la de…ek nahi do char dila de”
    nicely put :)

  • papaleng on Jan 20, 2012

    good message, friend.

  • rubysexy on Jan 20, 2012

    Thanks girlspuri. have a good day. Nice share.

  • Jay F. Samson on Jan 20, 2012

    I love it! =)

  • Muzammil196 on Jan 20, 2012

    Great idea.

  • aheed411 on Jan 20, 2012

    It’s great

  • Mohamed Abdel Fattah Hussein on Jan 20, 2012

    Good message, friend.

  • Mohamed Abdel Fattah Hussein on Jan 20, 2012

    Very nice.

  • Mohamed Abdel Fattah Hussein on Jan 20, 2012

    Very nice.

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 20, 2012

    This is very touchy, good one.

  • Angelji on Jan 20, 2012

    God is great !

  • iva75cpb on Jan 20, 2012

    Love is in the little things. Wonderful.

  • AliAhmad on Jan 20, 2012

    interesting…

  • erwinkennythomas on Jan 20, 2012

    uplifting

  • girishpuri on Jan 21, 2012

    thanks

  • mdrkarim7 on Jan 21, 2012

    ‘ EAST OR WEST YOUR HOME IS THE BEST ‘

    Indeed.

  • CutezSoNia on Jan 21, 2012

    Very nice.

  • avissado on Jan 24, 2012

    good stuff man

  • ittech on Jan 25, 2012

    Nice read

  • ittech on Jan 27, 2012

    Wonderful piece of writing. This is mind-blowing stuff, my friend.

  • CutezSoNia on Jan 30, 2012

    reading again.. thanks

  • girishpuri on Jan 31, 2012

    i like it

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