Comments on: My Offer http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/ Wed, 15 Feb 2012 13:46:48 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: ladydryle http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/comment-page-1/#comment-1054249 ladydryle Fri, 11 Dec 2009 19:51:35 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/#comment-1054249 Call me and I’ll coming knocking on your door So if you are willing to give me half a chance You play the music and I’ll dance the dance love this line...great work! Call me and I’ll coming knocking on your door
So if you are willing to give me half a chance
You play the music and I’ll dance the dance

love this line…great work!

]]> By: mo hoyal http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/comment-page-1/#comment-1046380 mo hoyal Sun, 06 Dec 2009 20:29:25 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/#comment-1046380 A wonderful poem but sad to me. It is not good what goes on in our world now and I don't like how things are and miss the happier days. I will say a prayer that you will find gainful employment. I had to quit a job last year due to disability problems but I noticed after going back to work 20 years later, the people you have to work with were not too desirable a bunch, so be careful when you do get a job-in who you let in to your life or heart! This is a sincere caution! A wonderful poem but sad to me. It is not good what goes on in our world now and I don’t like how things are and miss the happier days. I will say a prayer that you will find gainful employment. I had to quit a job last year due to disability problems but I noticed after going back to work 20 years later, the people you have to work with were not too desirable a bunch, so be careful when you do get a job-in who you let in to your life or heart! This is a sincere caution!

]]> By: PhoenixRox http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/comment-page-1/#comment-1037689 PhoenixRox Wed, 02 Dec 2009 07:50:26 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/#comment-1037689 I too hope things improve. As for your poem, it is superb. And if I had a job opportunity, I would have wanted u to send me a resume in the form of that poem.It is so cool! I too hope things improve. As for your poem, it is superb. And if I had a job opportunity, I would have wanted u to send me a resume in the form of that poem.It is so cool!

]]> By: sunshine926 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/comment-page-1/#comment-1035184 sunshine926 Mon, 30 Nov 2009 22:50:45 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/#comment-1035184 Great poem. I hope the unemployment situation gets resolved soon. This is stressing a lot of people. Today, I went to Barnes and Nobles during my break and noticed a lot of angry people yelling and screaming for no reason. That is great to know that you were a firefighter Jimbob1. I am sure that you got recognition throughout the years for saving a life. Congrats! on your achievements. Great poem. I hope the unemployment situation gets resolved soon. This is stressing a lot of people. Today, I went to Barnes and Nobles during my break and noticed a lot of angry people yelling and screaming for no reason. That is great to know that you were a firefighter Jimbob1. I am sure that you got recognition throughout the years for saving a life. Congrats! on your achievements.

]]> By: lillyrose http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/comment-page-1/#comment-1034448 lillyrose Mon, 30 Nov 2009 15:29:51 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/#comment-1034448 Awww I remember this one! great and amusing write as always! Awww I remember this one! great and amusing write as always!

]]> By: cebuanaeyez http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/comment-page-1/#comment-1033822 cebuanaeyez Mon, 30 Nov 2009 06:49:20 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/#comment-1033822 Thousands of people are unemployed! Good poem. You were a fire fighter? Thousands of people are unemployed! Good poem. You were a fire fighter?

]]> By: Jon Abraham http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/comment-page-1/#comment-1032791 Jon Abraham Sun, 29 Nov 2009 15:45:26 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-offer/#comment-1032791 Very honest poem! Very honest poem!

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