Poem.

Vicariously I enjoy rain

let my hat take its taps

and thumps under trees, gutters

voiced on my shield

not muted in hair.

Image by carianoff via Flickr

My car stopped

I wait,

drops falling on blank wind slate

old woman leg veins

on wipered glass

growing veins slowly

patiently erasing the screeched paths

of rubber blades.

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  • vishali on Dec 8, 2009

    nice ! :)

  • mkd1788 on Dec 8, 2009

    nicely expressed…good work

  • athena goodlight on Dec 14, 2009

    I love the rain, too. nice one!

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 28, 2009

    Very interesting work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

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