My Seductress

The Last Ogre on Oct 20, 2009

Sweet temptations, rejected.

She came like a whisper in the night.

Her voice a tender caress.

How she troubled my senses.

My seductress…

She’s a vision of my wildest dreams,

with her face of an angel

and a body hot, as hell.

My seductress…

She haunts me in my sleepless hours.

Thoughts of her drive me insane.

How I longed to be with her.

My seductress…

Sweet, sweet woman, my greatest sin.

I’m in love with another.

Never shall I desert her.

Farewell… My seductress…

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Comments (8)

lillyrose on Oct 20, 2009
glad you resisted temptation!! Great poem, good read.
Debra. on Oct 21, 2009
You stayed true! Good for you!
kate smedley on Oct 21, 2009
Lovely poem, lovely flow to it.
Joe Dorish on Oct 21, 2009
Good poem!
deepblue on Oct 21, 2009
Very well written. Full of emotions.
ssaunders on Oct 21, 2009
Wow great poem.
Temptation is so very hard to resist.
Jane Jane on Oct 22, 2009
great poem. good ending.
The Cinders on Nov 5, 2009
I liked the piece but it feels like it’s missing something. I just… I don’t know, I wasn’t satisfied at the end. But a very good write regardless. Very nice descriptions.
Bria.

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