A poem about two sisters divided from the start and never making it back to each other.

You were supposed to be my first best friend
We were to look out for one another
I tried to always be there when things got rough
And though we grew up in the same home
You took a path separate from mine
We spoke less and less over the years
I tried to extend a hand and do what was right
But I lost you my sister and my first best friend

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  • Darla Cooke on Oct 16, 2009

    A very touching and emotion filled poem.

  • cardy on Oct 17, 2009

    Aww lovely work from you!

  • mynameisjessica on Oct 18, 2009

    This was great. Love the emotion. Nice work.

  • Renee Hendricks on Oct 19, 2009

    Thank you all – poetry writing isn’t my thing but I thought I’d try my hand at it.

  • Tracey Parece on Oct 22, 2009

    Great poem. It reminds me of my feelings about my first best friend (also a relative) and the loss of that friendship. Added you as a Triond friend. Keep up the great writing.

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