My Son, My Precious Son

nobert soloria bermosa on Aug 13, 2009

Tags: father and son, love of father to a son, poem for a son

This is lovingly dedicated to my beloved son Ayen James.

You ‘ve been wrong so many times

have showed a bit of foolishness

and displayed some stubborness

And I will admit there were times

I almost given up on you

There were times

I ignored you

I refused to lend a hand

But that doesn’t mean

I love you no more or less

I did that for a reason

Though it’s tearing me apart

I want you to get up

on your own and learn

from your mistakes somehow

I’m aware I have shortcomings

Neglected you for sometimes

and failed to spend some

valuable times with you

My son, my precious son

I want you to remember

I love you and I will never leave you

Physically, I may not be with you always

But in spirit, I will always be with you

It breaks my heart into pieces

seeing you lying helplessly

on this solitary room

But all I can do

is pervently hope and pray

you’ll have a speedy recovery.

I LOVE YOU!

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PR Mace on Aug 14, 2009
My dear Nobert,

I hope your son will be better soon. Your poem was touching and filled with emotion. Our children are always in our hearts but as they become adults we can no longer protect them from life. I am finding that out with our children. My prayer are with you.

Your friend, Pam
Unofre Pili on Aug 14, 2009
A touching piece. I wish him get well soon.
Brave Photographer on Aug 14, 2009
Very emotional poem.
R.B. Parsley on Aug 14, 2009
Nobert,
This poem is on overflow in the emotions department. Your son is in my prayers as are you and his mother. Hang in their buddy, god is watching over you my friend. Excellent poem! I felt every word of this as I read it.

Randy
Melody SJAL on Aug 14, 2009
Hope your son recovers soon. This piece really touches the heart, Nobert.
xoxo on Aug 14, 2009
A very nice piece. We’ll pray for your son to get better soon.
Christine Ramsay on Aug 14, 2009
Such a very lovely tribute to your son, Nobert. I really feel for you, having two grown up sons myself. You never stop loving them and worrying about them. I hope he is soon well.

Christine
Goodselfme on Aug 14, 2009
A speedy recovery to your son. My sorrow is for you having emotional pains as this.Blessings for strength, friend.
Brenda Nelson on Aug 14, 2009
wow touching and moving, well written and from the heart.
I join the others in wishing YOU support and a healthy recovery for your son.
Juancav on Aug 14, 2009
Beautiful and inspiring poem.
CHAN LEE PENG on Aug 14, 2009
All the best for your son. Have my liked it too.
lindalulu on Aug 14, 2009
Awww….I so hope your son gets better really soon! My thoughts and prayers are with you both.
Moses Ingram on Aug 14, 2009
Beauiful piece, may your son be well soon.
Judy Sheldon on Aug 14, 2009
It breaks our hearts when our children hurt. Nobert you have my prayers. You must keep us posted.

Take care & God bless.
Kate Smedley on Aug 15, 2009
How heartbreaking, I do hope he is better soon Nobert.
nobert soloria bermosa on Aug 15, 2009
guys, thanks to all of you,thanks for the prayer,he’s a bit better now,thanks again and God Bless
deep blue on Aug 15, 2009
You have a great child. A father always has the skill to rear their young.
Ruby Hawk on Aug 15, 2009
Nobert,I hope your son will be all right. He has my best wishes for a speedy recovery.
CutestPrincess on Aug 18, 2009
Bravo. Well done and thought provoking as well. you’re such a great dad…
Papa Sparks on Aug 27, 2009
Very touching. Thanks so much for sharing.

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