At times, I have what might be termed as temporal displacements. They are quite overpowering and at times disquieting. This poem is an attempt to explain what happens during these times.

This road was a different road,

This face was a different face.

Just an hour ago.

Just a decade ago.

Just a second ago,

I was twenty years younger.

Just a minute ago,

I was twenty years older.

Image via Wikipedia

Just a minute ago,

I was on a different road.

Image via Wikipedia

Just a second ago,

your face was someone else.

The leaves were falling on the street.

The snow was melting on the ice.

Rain on the windows.

I was eating an apple.

Brilliant electric blue.

I was eating a sandwich.

Lavender green.

I was eating an apple.

Shocking pink!

I was eating a sandwich.

Lavender blue.

I was dancing.

The fluttering of doves.

I was walking.

Image via Wikipedia

The frolicking of snowmen.

I was crawling.

The pronging of sheep.

I was sleeping.

A dragonfly floats by.

A symbol of immortality.

The rain falls on cement.

The cantor of horses.

The rain falls on grass.

The banter of old men.

A leaf.

The gossip of old women.

A page of a book.

A soft sensual sigh.

A television show.

Endless repeats that repeat.

I remember it.

I was the sequel.

I am the prequel.

A constant preamble, repeating.

A skip of the record.

Image via Wikipedia

I remember vinyl.

I remember 8-Tracks.

Long hair.

I remember cassettes.

Spikey hair.

CDs, DVDs,

Pink hair,

331/3 RPM,

45RPM,

78RPM,

16 RPM,

Blue hair,

8MM,

16MM,

Image via Wikipedia

Super 8 was more than a motel.

A slide show was once a grand affair,

laser lights and album tracks.

Black lipstick.

At times I have woke up on

the wrong side of consciousness,

like a stylus thrown haphazardly,

onto vinyl.

Image via Wikipedia

This temporal displacement,

needs to focus.

Just a waste, skipping about like this.

Just a waste, cutting my thoughts like this.

Just a waste, binding me up like all of this.

Image via Wikipedia

Stop this hiccup!

Begin to exist in the desire.

It is time to wake up on the right side of consciousness.

5
Liked it
Comments (5)
  • rizzei on Sep 27, 2009

    i remember things with those lovely lines..wonderful! :)

  • ken bultman on Sep 27, 2009

    Not a waste…a fun, bumpy ride. My problem is the frontal lobe.

  • deep blue on Sep 27, 2009

    You had a glimpse of eternity out there, even your past lives. Maybe hiccups are natural ways of getting ourselves into a past life regression, whatever. Marvelous lines, Mark.

    Will

  • Chris Marlowe II on Sep 27, 2009

    Dear Mr M. G. Brown,

    It\’s my pleasure to inform you that your piece of poetry is one of the most stunning poems I\’ve ever read here on Triond (or anywhere else):

    \”I remember it./I was the sequel./I am the prequel./A constant preamble, repeating./A skip of the record.\”

    How true this is. This sort of \”déjà vu\” or \”dislocation\” of Time & Place.

    I\’ve found myself expressed in your work.

    Yours Truly,
    the One & Only
    Troll of Triond

  • Lostash on Sep 27, 2009

    This is one of the best pieces I’ve seen in a long while. Not only can I relate to it, but on some level, I felt it too. Truly great stuff!

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading