My Temptation

Lady Sunshine on Nov 22, 2009

Tags: Bed, beloved, delight, Desire, Eat You Up, lick, night, pumpkin pie, sin, sweet, taste, temptation, tongue, visions

Giving in to my sin.

I lie awake in my bed
With thoughts of you in my head
Tossing and turning all night
With visions of you that delight
Fueling a fire that you sprung
Wanting to taste you on my tongue
I long to lick you all over
Leaving me so hungover
All I want is to eat you up
This dream just isn’t enough
Its time I quench this fire
And give in to my desire
So I get up out of my bed
And heads toward the kitchen instead
Where you await for me
Inciting in me such glee
I grab a fork and dig in
Indulging in my sweet sin
For you can no longer deny
My beloved pumpkin pie

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Papa Sparks on Nov 22, 2009
This was so sweet and precious. You are such a good writer and it has been really nice to watch you evolve into a better writer with each post here. You really should think about marketing these poems.

If I could make one small suggestion here–the lines ending in “over” are okay, but if you could find another word that has the same rhyme, that would work better I think.

I like your choice of words and the images you have painted here.
LOVELY HONEY on Nov 22, 2009
i too look like a pumpkin

if u peep in

some time u would like to

also eat me

good poetry
Jenny Heart on Nov 22, 2009
Nice!
ken bultman on Nov 22, 2009
Great culinary poetry. I know you just well enough to know where this one was going except I thought it would be ice cream. Nice job.
cardy on Nov 22, 2009
Loved this very nice work.
Atanacio on Nov 22, 2009
an honestly clever write Frank
Themax on Nov 22, 2009
haha I love to eat and dream it also,Thanks
Nice poem!
Shirley Shuler on Nov 22, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, you really had me going there for awhile, but I should have known where this was going, lol.
Teves on Nov 22, 2009
Very nice poem. Hi sunshine…
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Nov 22, 2009
Very nicely done.
svishnugopal on Nov 22, 2009
very clever, thats all i can say…lol very nice
Guy Hogan on Nov 23, 2009
You had me thinking all kinds of lustful thoughts. I was wondering why this woman’s lover was in the kitchen while she was waiting for him in bed? Silly me.
abhishek40914 on Nov 23, 2009
good one
deep blue on Nov 23, 2009
You could be so unpredictable at times. BTW, you did it good in the end. The drive had been satiated. Well done, LS.
cebuanaeyez on Nov 23, 2009
Ha! Ha! Ha! Nicely done!
giftarist on Nov 23, 2009
As usual Lady – the word is “clever.” Great work!
agriculi on Nov 23, 2009
Very creative
drelayaraja on Nov 23, 2009
Well done. great poem.
Yovita Siswati on Nov 24, 2009
Lovely poem!
shanthu on Nov 24, 2009
nice poem………thanks for the share…cheers mate
Jane Jane on Nov 25, 2009
I love the twist at the end. That makes it fun to read.
T.Rex McGoogle on Dec 9, 2009
Nice poem. Sometimes a pumpkin pie is the best therapy.
T.Rex McGoogle on Dec 9, 2009
It’s a very nice poem. Sometimes a pumpkin pie is the best therapy.

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