My Vampire Lover

Darla Cooke on Mar 2, 2009

Vampire lover visits at night.

You come to me at the midnight hour,

as I’m lying in my bed fast asleep.

While lightning streaks across the night sky,

into my darkened room you silently creep.

You glide over to stand by my bedside,

gazing down at my peaceful sleeping form.

The sound of thunder rumbles overhead,

outside there is a powerful raging storm.

You place your lips against my slender neck,

trailing your tongue along the throbbing vein.

I awaken to the feel of your sensual kiss,

knowing tonight I will feel pleasurable pain.

You sink your fangs into my tender flesh,

binding our lives together for all eternity.

You have always been my vampire lover,

there can never be anyone else for me.

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Comments (18)

M A Bhanpurwala on Mar 2, 2009
Nice one
Sandra A Flowers on Mar 2, 2009
beautifully written, love the rhyming and content, excellent,
Kelin Hurt on Mar 2, 2009
did you bite back
postpunkpixie on Mar 2, 2009
Very sensual.
lh on Mar 2, 2009
a matter of extreme longing and belonging i thought
lh
Joni Keith on Mar 2, 2009
Very sensual. You make it sound so beautiful.
Vikram Chhabra on Mar 2, 2009
Very descriptive poem. Nice images.
Alicia Wind on Mar 2, 2009
oh my …that was …sensual…!
MoRbId FrOsT on Mar 2, 2009
I love vampires and reading this poem was like ating a bluberry crumb cake ^.^ I loved every bite of it! lol
Ruby Hawk on Mar 2, 2009
Reminds me of Anne Rice. Well done.
AC Hamilton III on Mar 2, 2009
Very sexy and nicely written. You make me proud Darla.

AC
Kns1992 on Mar 2, 2009
I absolutely love this!!!!
Did you read or watch Twilight?
vim3 on Mar 3, 2009
Great imagination. I really liked the way this was written. Passionate, dangerous and sensual.
Westbrook on Mar 3, 2009
Whoa… Sounds like a little rough love here. lol
Yovita Siswati on Mar 3, 2009
this is very sexy…
Leanne Storey on Mar 3, 2009
Amazingly Beautiful. I love it. I wrote one similiar to this called My Only Wish but this one is so much better than mine. i’m glad to read someone elses writes that are so good and similiar to mine. I like your unique style.
Sakuragi on Mar 5, 2009
Nice! Images vividly described!
Colleen Ranney on Mar 6, 2009
Great poem but scares me

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