My Vision

amandeep13 on Feb 28, 2010

Tags: Aspect of life, difficult situations, friendship, hand shake, love, My vision, permission, tension

We all are come in this world for many sub missions and one common and big mission. I am trying to explain this mission to my friends in the form of a beautiful poem. I hope you can understand this and will enjoy the life.

I have a vision,

Without any personal reason.

I am on a mission,

But also need your permission.

You are in tension,

We have to fight with this situation.

Please give your attention,

These things are gifted by the god to mention.

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Starpisces on Feb 28, 2010
well said…and I now give you my permission, ha ha..
pearl2010 on Feb 28, 2010
I like the rhyming of this poem.
You can check my poem too.Thanks.
http://authspot.com/poetry/far-away-from-you/
Precious Illusions on Feb 28, 2010
beautiful
miss suger on Feb 28, 2010
nice words.. keep it up
patampar on Feb 28, 2010
nice
Anj M on Feb 28, 2010
Well wirtten.
Judi Eddy on Feb 28, 2010
very good. judi
The Easy Way on Feb 28, 2010
well written!
indu on Feb 28, 2010
work is super
Jimmy Shilaho on Feb 28, 2010
I have missed it, forgive me for asking, where is it?
Butterfly Dreaming on Feb 28, 2010
Hi amandeep13, thanks for adding me as a friend and commenting on my articles, I appreciate it and have done the same. This is a nice poem, short and sweet!
PR Mace on Feb 28, 2010
I’m not sure what your mission is but the poem was nicely done.
sambhafusia on Mar 1, 2010
Interesting read dear….excellent share………
Literatour on Mar 1, 2010
Nice!! Tanks
albert1jemi on Mar 1, 2010
excellent one

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