I dedicated this for my love.

When I saw you sit beside the tree
And you were thinking so freely
I suddenly stopped my walk
Then I began to stalk
You felt that there was someone watching you

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And you felt that someone was stalking at you
Oh baby, don’t be so cruel
You were the one who made me like a fool
It’s your mystic eyes that made this feeling
It’s your mystic eyes that made me feel like flying
And when you looked at me with a smile
Your mystic eye put my life with the style.

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  • The Quail on Aug 28, 2008

    well done very moving.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Aug 28, 2008

    lovely and sweet,one of the many mysteries of love

  • Tina Brazee on Sep 17, 2008

    Fantastic! Very sweet poem for the one you love. It warmed my heart.

  • Eden Emersen on Oct 15, 2008

    The photo does feature someone with lovely eyes. . . you capture the mystique well.

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