Naked (Acrostic Verse)

drelayaraja on Jan 9, 2010

Tags: artificial, death, drelayaraja, elayaraja, kindnessm heaven, Life, meaningful, naked, nirvana, skin

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Acrostic Verse.

Naked (Acrostic Verse)

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

N – Nothing artificial to wear

A – Armour becomes the skin

K – Kindness of the heaven

E – Envelops the body

D – Death becomes meaningless, when life becomes meaningful.

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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Comments (29)

Francois Hagnere on Jan 9, 2010
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Best wishes.
metro7 on Jan 9, 2010
How true we come into this world naked n finish the journey n leave naked.it finishes the circle complete.
Christine Ramsay on Jan 9, 2010
That is the circle of life. Beautiful work.

Christine
Guy Hogan on Jan 9, 2010
The text and photos go perfectly together. The two are an excellent representation of the circle of life.
Frances Lawrence on Jan 9, 2010
Very thought provoking, well written, I love the pictures too.
bailieman on Jan 9, 2010
Excellent acrostic poetry.
The Last Ogre on Jan 9, 2010
Cool piece.
Videomark on Jan 9, 2010
Great word play.
albert1jemi on Jan 9, 2010
excellent words
8Shei8 on Jan 9, 2010
Simply brilliant!
8Shei8 on Jan 9, 2010
simply brilliant
LewSethics on Jan 9, 2010
interesting piece
Poetic Enigma on Jan 9, 2010
Very wonderful write, thank you for sharing!
xoxo on Jan 9, 2010
Lovely write.
SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 10, 2010
Sweet!
wonder on Jan 10, 2010
Very creative.
Starpisces on Jan 10, 2010
a short but very creative post!
and I like the picture (I’m referring to the first pic… heehee).
LovelyWolf on Jan 10, 2010
Love it, this really made my day!
Night Story on Jan 10, 2010
Very good work.
qasimdharamsy on Jan 10, 2010
Very Nice … Beautiful write….
CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 11, 2010
Cool and sweet! Thanks for the read.
bluray on Jan 11, 2010
beautiful piece of writing..
deep blue on Jan 11, 2010
Well crafted lines and thoughts with matching images.
Jane Jane on Jan 11, 2010
meaningful piece.
Priyanka Bhowmick on Jan 12, 2010
i loved the last line….another gud acrostic!!
ladydryle on Jan 12, 2010
Good acrostic…. very meaningful, this is an eye opener i must say,short but it makes you realize more things in life after you were born and eventually until you die….
Moses Ingram on Jan 12, 2010
Very meaningful.
Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Jan 13, 2010
Naked, that’s the way we should be.:)
T. S. Lewis on Jan 18, 2010
The last line is one to build on. Greatness

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