A rough draft of my poem from my anthology "Inside Out." Nameless describes the sense of loss of identity, in society we are named and that creates a meaning about who we are or who we should be. But who are we really? And will we always be haunted by our past and who we once were?

Nameless

I know who I am. I know what I am.

Yet I cannot find my identity.

Lost.

       Missing.

                   Voided.

Floating in                          Abyss.

I think…

Maybe…

I possessed it at an earlier age

But to where I may have placed it,

I am lost…

In the backward motion of life,

Was that my only opportunity?

As I gaze through the pane glass window

At the life I once led,

Is the torture of striving for what once was,

A punishment … ?

  

             Or a warning … ?

          … For what I have become … ?

….. Or for who I have become?

If

I have missed my only hope

Then I am blinded.

I cannot see

Without an Identity.

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  • Kosmin on Mar 29, 2011

    Nice poem! Everyone feels that they’re lost at some point in their lives and I think that you expressed it very well in your poem.

  • hfj on Mar 29, 2011

    A very nice poem with a great format. We all at some point in our lives have to step back and evaluate where we are, and where do we want to go. You summed up this feeling very well in this poem. Good job friend.

  • anndavey650 on Mar 29, 2011

    All lost at sea… I like it!

  • V rank on Mar 29, 2011

    Rough it may as you said, but the emotion is there already…

  • J L Carey Jr on Mar 13, 2012

    This poem speaks to the current climate really well.

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