A poem of hope.

Photo By jhonny- on and off- busy with baby

Dark, grey clouds in the sky,

unending rain cascades.

Some chilly air blows by

as it swirls savagely.

Water drips everywhere,

icy cold and sticky wet.

Some inconveniences,

bad weathers of our lives.

How we wish for the sun.

How we hope for such warmth.

Then again, after the rain…

A rainbow may be seen.

And, there is always tomorrow

for the sun may chose to show.

But, then again, if not…

Just don’t forget our umbrella,

for us to make it through the rain.

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Other weather poem s by this author:

Ten Minute Temptation

Cold January

From Bright to Grey Skies

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  • K.Reshma on Nov 5, 2009

    Very nice poem

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 5, 2009

    Nice poem with great picture

  • Unofre Pili on Nov 5, 2009

    Sounds written by a seasoned poet. Excellent piece friend…

  • MMV Abad on Nov 5, 2009

    Wow, Unofre. Great to see you again, my friend :)

  • diamondpoet on Nov 5, 2009

    Nice poem!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 5, 2009

    Nice poem, good write.

  • lindalulu on Nov 5, 2009

    very nice…

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Nov 5, 2009

    Very nicely written.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Nov 5, 2009

    very well expressed…hope it won’t happen again

  • MMV Abad on Nov 5, 2009

    Thank you for commenting friends. Well, appreciated.

  • Geomorphosis on Nov 5, 2009

    Nice flow, madame. We all have our ‘bad days’ and ‘bad days’ are not permanent. We can always expect some good news sooner or later.

    Regards,
    Maxx

  • neet on Nov 5, 2009

    Beautiful poem.

  • Darla Smith on Nov 5, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 5, 2009

    Well penned for imagery of what you see. TX

  • Juancav on Nov 5, 2009

    Wise poem.

  • kate smedley on Nov 5, 2009

    Lovely flow and beautiful imagery in this poem.

  • Joe Dorish on Nov 5, 2009

    Liked the poem and I almost always forget the umbrella.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 5, 2009

    good work,

  • Annashank on Nov 5, 2009

    Really nice write!!! :)

  • deep blue on Nov 5, 2009

    Marvelous piece. Very uplifting, kabayan.

  • Debra. on Nov 6, 2009

    Really nice poem, Mae.

  • BC Doan on Nov 6, 2009

    Nice poem, MMV! You’ve described my weather here..

  • mishee on Nov 6, 2009

    love the poem! If there is life, there is hope. :)

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 10, 2009

    another I like,

  • Ghassane JAMMAL on Nov 10, 2009

    nice poem, and beautiful picture

  • Jane Jane on Nov 13, 2009

    great piece.

  • vycess on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice poem!

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