Nation’s Pride

Baijayanti Pradhan on Sep 7, 2010

Tags: 24, act, Baijayanti Pradhan, cause, clean, cure, disease, Fight, fighter, germ, havoc, hour, injection, medicine, Nation's Pride, Outsider, poem, Poetry, service, spleen

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Nation’s pride…

They act like spleen,

fight for the outsider

always ready to clean

the germs as a fighter.

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When the disease become serious,

they use injection and medicine

to completely cure the diseases

as they cause havoc both inside, outside.

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They are our nation’s pride

Twenty-four give their service.

- The End -

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Comments (13)

Noeal V on Sep 7, 2010
Nice Poem
PSingh1990 on Sep 7, 2010
nice poem…….i like it.

thanks for share.
Christine Ramsay on Sep 7, 2010
An interesting piece.
Fornis on Sep 7, 2010
Good one. Twenty four hours service or start their service from age 24? I guess you mean both. That is the kind of twist I find with poems.
Abhipray Sahoo on Sep 7, 2010
Another great poem I see today!
Mr.Reggie on Sep 7, 2010
Nice Poetry, Nice Share..
Anuradha Ramkumar on Sep 7, 2010
Starting a 24 hour service isn’t enough, the service must be available all the 24-hrs. I hope you understand what I mean…:)
V rank on Sep 9, 2010
simple words are more powerful than any other forms of writing… you have it here…
Raj the Tora on Sep 9, 2010
Excellent one
risi on Sep 9, 2010
Nice poem !
Gaurav Jeevan on Sep 11, 2010
Nice poem !!
mkd1788 on Sep 13, 2010
wow…great post…nicely expressed…
Brewed Coffee on Sep 19, 2010
An interesting poem

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