Poem.

Your twists and turns pull me inI must run and run to followI am barefoot so I can feel your calmRush against my skin
You twinkle beneath the sunlightGlistening silver and goldI want to capture your beautyYou are so so so
So amazingNature’s giftThe stream

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Comments (10)
  • Dreamy777 on Apr 7, 2011

    I like it great share

  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 7, 2011

    such great words of expression

  • Thespeakman on Apr 7, 2011

    spot on that – thank you

  • Kata de la Fraye on Apr 7, 2011

    another brilliant poem

  • foxpete88 on Apr 7, 2011

    great share..thanks

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 12, 2011

    Just beautiful nature is,
    We all know this,
    But man made malady,
    Harms every bit,
    Nuclear explosion,
    Oil spills,
    Human minds drill.
    Nature never dies
    But it in return kills,
    Be it an earthquake
    Or
    A tsunami,
    Nature is the only one,
    That can remain
    Un insane

  • Olive Gardener on Apr 15, 2011

    Interesting spacing…but overall great concept!!!

  • Lilliana F on Apr 15, 2011

    The spacing has moved since it was published…grrr!

  • jeremy322 on Apr 16, 2011

    A great poem, makes me appreciate nature a bit more.

  • gaby7 on Apr 18, 2011

    The best way to keep nature’s beauty is simply to care about everything you do in this world.

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