Funny. You can imagine it well..

Wonderful Ruby you’ve painted a very pretty picture here.

Ruby, I love this little fun piece!

God bless, my friend.

That was so cute. well done.

Christine

Very nice and cute. I know my kitten brings a lot of joy to my world.

I have just watched the stray kittens across the road wiggle and jiggle, how lovely you describe it Ruby.

I loved the rhythmic sound! Wiggle, jiggle, giggle, giggle…

AWW…very cute, Ruby.

Who can resist a playful little kitten. You’ve portrayed their playfulness beautifully here, Ruby.

I hate being late with my comments – the word cute has already been used by 3 commenters. But your poem is just soo..cute!
As I write this, my kitty is walking across the keyboard. She is fascinated by the moving stuff on the screen.

i enjoy reading this… such a cute piece with rhyme!

This is visually felt in your mind as I read it. Funny, and touching! Love it!

You did a great job making this poem imaginative.

what a soft but lively write,, I like the rhytmic sounds and the rhyme.. love this one Ruby..

very nice piece of work

Lol, cute!

you seldom post a poem but it’s always a hit,thanks for this wonderful piece Ruby

I like poems where you can really picture what is being said, and that is what this one does. Good job!

So cute, love it sooo much, thanks.

such a cute poem!

Ruby, you have painted a very playful picture of some cute
naughty kittens!

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This was great. I have such a hard time writing peotry about an object, I have to do it about my feelings. But you did fantastic! This was great!!!! Nice job on getting on the hot content list! I loved it

pics would have been nice, but you painted it anyway with words.. that still made it cute..

Funny poem. I can imagine how cute is your kitten. I love the ryhme too. I think I will read it to my daughter. She will love it! Thanks for sharing this great work!

very funy, brillaint rhythm and rhyme.

cheers.

I like the aural effects of this piece, very nicely done.
Yet, your rhythm here is kind of choppy, because you jump around from long to short lines. If you set the pace and keep it at the same rhythm as;
“Whipper-wills begin their vigil
With a visage of delight
Keeping rhythm, Keeping rhythm
With the magic of the night”
Then, this piece would have gone from free form to poem no problem at all. (This excerpt has all the qualities of the ballad)
Other than that, your whipper-wills should actually be whippoorwills all one word. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed this piece.

it reminds me of our kittens before. really cute that all you want is to hug them and kiss them!

they’re really a stress-reliever and i do believe all pets are.

Ruby, what a cute fun poem. You must be watching those kittens. Don’t let them steal your mittens. You know that everyone will understand the mittens statement. I bet you do.

Cute.

Inna

great.

Very cute Ruby.

RJ

I enjoyed that Ruby

Thank you-thank you-thank you everyone. I’m so happy that you liked my little poem. I thought a little humor might be welcome and I am glad it was.sorry to say, I am allergic to cats and don’t have any but my granddaughter does and she loves her kitties. She has stories to tell me every time she visits.

Adam Henry, thank you so much for your opinion. I realy do appreciate it but my poem is exactly as I meant it to be. Whipper-will too. That’s the way we say it in north Georgia. Please feel free to give me your opioion in the future.I may not agree but I appreciate every comment that is made.

I love reading this! It is light, lively, and delightful.

Thank you, Ruby

Cute and delightful.

I have three cats. This is amusing and a fun read.
Thanks,Ruby.

Fun, cute and imaginative. Good work!
Thanks,
Clay