I know its Babbling but this day it was gabbing… he he cheers.

Way back there…

Were the tomorrow

Did not exist

It seems now

It was over

Before it begun.

.

The weather was inclement

The sun was going down

As you… Rolled

In to my arms

After a abracadabra!

The sun was coming back up

The sap and me

We were getting on fine

.

We strolled passed a gabbing brook

Then rested in long flowing grass

Getting dizzy…

Just looking at sky

Next day…

Was much the same

Played a little

Loved a lot

.

Rose tinted springs to mind

Then again to much sunshine

Ain’t too good for a thirsty fool

Little did we know…

What fate held in store for us

Snow flake on my butt…

Melted us into tears of laughter

Every first snow still brings…

A wry old grin

Then there’s you smiling back

Through all those years.

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Comments (11)
  • Atanacio on Aug 4, 2011

    another top notch write Matt :)

  • LewSethics on Aug 4, 2011

    Once I was free as a gypsy.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 4, 2011

    That is rather romantic, Matt. Nice work.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Aug 4, 2011

    Made me smile

  • sloanie on Aug 4, 2011

    I never had a snowflake on my butt, but I did once get stung on it, iff you know what I mean!!. Enjoyed the read Matt.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 4, 2011

    Oh Matt, where does the time go? Seems like yesterday.

  • Karen Gross on Aug 4, 2011

    Very nostalgic, romantic, poignant. Easy to get lost in this one.

  • sambasivarao on Aug 5, 2011

    Its given great pleasure to me.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Aug 6, 2011

    Love the lines, Matt.

  • gaby7 on Aug 7, 2011

    Great share!

  • Linda Lori on Sep 10, 2011

    Simply wonderful! :)

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