Philly Dreamer is challenging the poets of Triond yet again. I only hope I can compete with all the great talent out there.

Need

Of Love

Unconditional

Is

Unconditional

Love of

Need

Check out Philly Dreamer’s new poetry challenge at:  Poetry Challenge: Reflections in The Mirror

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  • PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 29, 2012

    This one I find interesting. I’m wanting to know if you meant to say that someone looking for unconditional love is needy, or if you meant to say someone looking for unconditional love is capable of unconditional love. It feels like it can be interpreted in two ways. Really good job with this one.

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 29, 2012

    Love is unconditional.

  • avissado on Jan 29, 2012

    fantastic play of words

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 29, 2012

    Thank you for all the comments and support. God Bless!

    @Philly – I was going for someone looking for unconditional love is needy, however you are correct, it can be interpreted both ways and someone looking for unconditional love is very capable of unconditional love.

  • haashvikha on Jan 29, 2012

    interesting.

  • ImKarn23 on Jan 29, 2012

    amazing! insightful! BRAVE!

  • HannanRKhan on Jan 29, 2012

    Really really nice

  • FX777222999 on Jan 29, 2012

    Good poem.

  • xphantoms on Jan 29, 2012

    Liek poetry

  • sheilanewton on Jan 29, 2012

    Excellent. Must look at Philly’s new challenge.

  • V rank on Jan 29, 2012

    That is something special…

  • tr10nd3rs on Jan 29, 2012

    thanks 4 share

  • girishpuri on Jan 29, 2012

    nice poem

  • branzaovidiu on Jan 30, 2012

    nice

  • Secre22 on Jan 30, 2012

    There are really only two things which we can expect unconditional love off; parents who have no choice in the matter and God who is unconditional love.

  • bryan21764 on Jan 30, 2012

    Your talent is appreciated :)

  • lucia anna on Jan 30, 2012

    I agree with bryan

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 30, 2012

    Thanks for all the support my friends. I’m glad to know you all!

  • ilikep2s on Jan 30, 2012

    This is very good =)

  • Margaret Boseroy on Jan 31, 2012

    Very cool! I’ve never thought of poetry like this. Sometimes challenges posed by other people can bring out the best of us. Great job!

  • Sonm Man on Jan 31, 2012

    Nice share

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 31, 2012

    Thank you to those who have recently commented, God Bless!

  • marqjonz on Jan 31, 2012

    Very good. A poem about unconditional love that’s not all kittens and rainbows.

  • lyan08 on Feb 1, 2012

    nice share..

  • lyan08 on Feb 1, 2012

    nice share…

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 1, 2012

    @marqjonz – you made me smile with your comment, thank you for reading and commenting.

    Thank you to lyan08 as well for stopping by to read and comment.

    God bless you both.

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 1, 2012

    Very creative.

  • prsol46 on Feb 1, 2012

    Very nice work!

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 1, 2012

    Thank you Melody SJAL and prsol46, God Bless!

  • PruandMe on Feb 2, 2012

    Love of need?
    Hmm loves to be needed? Needs to be loved?

    I like it when you make me think, well done!

  • shelpeare on Feb 2, 2012

    Interesting. I need to try this :)

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 2, 2012

    Thank you PruandMe and shelpeare for reading and commenting, God Bless!

  • somiasom on Feb 3, 2012

    love it :)

  • avissado on Feb 3, 2012

    reading it again find it amazing how some of you have met the P challenge. It sounds almost impossible to me! cheers

  • avissado on Feb 3, 2012

    reading it again find it amazing how some of you have met the P challenge. It sounds almost impossible to me! cheers

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 4, 2012

    Thank you somiasom and avissado for reading and commenting, God Bless!

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