Just a little poem I wrote for a girl.

I can never be satisfied with you
 Cause the
Days are never long enough
Hours are way too short
Minutes pass too quickly
Life lasts only so long

I can never be satisfied with you
 Cause the
Kisses, caresses and dreams
Are only fleeting
Love may be forever but
Life lasts only so long

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  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 15, 2008

    Oh so true. We just have to make the most of the time we have.
    Good work.

    Christine

  • lisa on Dec 15, 2008

    awwwwwwwww this poem is so sweet

  • Kim Buck on Jan 6, 2009

    Oh! The agony of never having enough time!

  • PR Mace on Aug 23, 2009

    Time, seems we never have enough.

  • Palestrya on Mar 2, 2011

    I understand this poem. Nicely done.

  • C.V. Sivaprakashan on Mar 17, 2011

    nice share!

  • giritharanj on Mar 18, 2011

    nice share

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