I don’t believe you loved me,
You don’t believe I cared.

So many times,
they jabbed into your soul
So when I said I loved you…
So many times,
they jabbed into my soul
So when you said you loved me…
Falling, falling, falling
down into that trap
I still don’t know who it was that was used.
I don’t believe you loved me,
You don’t believe I cared
We thought we had it right,
sucks that we were wrong.
Climbing, climbing, climbing
out from that suffocating grip.
When they raped you, they raped me…
When they f***’d me, they f***’d you…
Now we’ll never be the same.

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Comments (6)
  • clay hurtubise on May 13, 2009

    Wow, strong piece. We are never the same from any experience, it is what you do with it that counts.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • STEVE666 on May 13, 2009

    A very strong, deep and personal piece.

  • payge on May 13, 2009

    I agree ..a strong deep emotional piece about a bad life experience and going through it.But its what you do after its happened that makes or breaks you.

  • Duff D Moss on May 17, 2009

    dark, hard and raw.

  • Kate Smedley on May 19, 2009

    Another powerful piece, very well written.

  • Poetic Enigma on Jun 4, 2009

    Deep, and strong words,
    Very poweful piece,
    Thanks for sharing!

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