I was in a strange mood.

Workin day and night
With a coal oil light
At my head
Nothin to dread

Nothing wrong
Everything right
Go go

Spirit in the wind
Gonna get my end
Swimmin the creek
Nothin too meek

Nothing wrong
Everything right
Go go

Movin my pen now
Across the page, oh wow
Makin signs
Signaling minds

Getting time
Plenty of craze
Go go

Never, never
Gonna, gonna
Stop!

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Comments (6)
  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 2, 2009

    A well written and very busy poem.

    Christine

  • Morgana on Jan 2, 2009

    I love it. I read it as a song…Go, go, never stop!!!

  • Darla Smith on Jan 2, 2009

    Nice poem!

  • lisa on Jan 2, 2009

    I agree with you! You were in a strange mood. But, the poem is so cute.

  • Kim Buck on Jan 5, 2009

    I can see the strangeness, but I can also dig it.

  • Palestrya on Mar 22, 2011

    And now for something a bit different . . . LOL

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