It is so troublesome to live in this pathetic world that is anyway going to be destroyed some day or other. So, why quit smoking!

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Punctured Air Sacs!

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Cigarette in mouth.

Smoke consumed fills one’s own chest…

Sending knife through lungs!

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Death Guaranteed!

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Venom is rolled in

White paper, as though it is good,

Consume and die slow!

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  • ceegirl on May 26, 2011

    Smoking is bad for you, no matter how you put it.

  • Raj the Tora on May 26, 2011

    Smoking not just kills the smoker, but also those around them, thatz exactly I am totally against smoking and never touched a tobacco product in life and will never touch one!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on May 26, 2011

    Hahaha, a creative way of warning us.

  • Ms. Courtney on May 26, 2011

    Good one!

  • Raj the Tora on May 26, 2011

    Thanks friends. Hope somebody stops smoking by reading thsi

  • gaby7 on May 27, 2011

    This is the kind of advise I would give to an intransigent smoker who has disregarded every counsel against smoking! There comes a time when we really need to say this to foolhardy tobacco addicts! Let them smoke and die off to save our breath!

  • Raj the Tora on May 27, 2011

    Very well said Gaby :)

  • The Cinders on May 31, 2011

    Gaby, you act like just because people smoke it means they’re less than you or of less value than you. It’s just rude and cruel to tell all smokers to die.

  • Raj the Tora on May 31, 2011

    @Cinders, so, is it okay that people smoke and kill nonsmokers for no mistake of theirs? If smokers are so reckless and careless about their nonsmoking families and friends, do they deserve the love and care in return? I do not vote to kill anybody; which is why I do not vote for smoking, as it kills the smoker as well as those around them!

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