Haiku – reflection.
Though she often leftHe never once said goodbyeEven when she died
That’s cruel. I wonder if he feels guilt or remorse now that she’s gone. I’m judging from his face.
Sad… and very deep. Some people do this in life… regret when the person has perished.
Wow! how do you write such terrific stuff?
Awe……
I rarely say good bye – it’s too final. I say so long, see you later etc.
Very heartfelt Martin. There’s a lot of power in those words.
so sad
You’re the best in this field… Hats off….
point of no return…doesn’t appeal
and now he died too and both said hi to each other on rusty gate of graveyard:)
sad! reflection
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