Haiku – reflection.

Though she often left
He never once said goodbye
Even when she died

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  • LoveDoctor on Feb 8, 2012

    That’s cruel. I wonder if he feels guilt or remorse now that she’s gone. I’m judging from his face.

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Feb 8, 2012

    Sad… and very deep.
    Some people do this in life… regret when the person has perished.

  • avissado on Feb 8, 2012

    Wow! how do you write such terrific stuff?

  • Elise Marie on Feb 8, 2012

    Awe…… :(

  • PruandMe on Feb 8, 2012

    I rarely say good bye – it’s too final. I say so long, see you later etc.

  • Nina Mason on Feb 8, 2012

    Very heartfelt Martin.
    There’s a lot of power in those words.

  • Safa on Feb 8, 2012

    so sad

  • mdrkarim7 on Feb 8, 2012

    You’re the best in this field… Hats off….

  • indianwriting on Feb 9, 2012

    point of no return…doesn’t appeal :)

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 9, 2012

    and now he died too and both said hi to each other on rusty gate of graveyard:)

  • lauralu on Feb 11, 2012

    sad! reflection

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