New Beginning

Josey on Sep 25, 2008

Tags: acceptance, beginning, friendship, Happiness, love, marriage, New, Poetry, starting over

It’s never too late to start over.

Feeling down and lonely
I revealed myself to you
Not sure what to expect
A chance for something new
You made me feel less shameful
For what once seemed forsaken
I crawled out of the cracks
And let myself be taken
Thank you for your treasure search
And for dusting off the gem
You took a broken spirit
And made my life less grim
And now I owe you plenty
A life of happy endings
Because when you found me
You brought a new beginning

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nobert soloria bermosa on Sep 25, 2008
beautifully written with perfect rhyming, so sweet and so lovely,it’s really nice to be in love,
goodselfme on Sep 25, 2008
Your style here is so vivid carrying the read so smoothly. So very well done, my friend.
Unofre Pili on Sep 25, 2008
Hi Josey. I like the way you craft your lines. Beautiful and strong.
Fabian C on Sep 25, 2008
Nice story.
Eric Mendoza on Sep 25, 2008
You’re right, it’s never to late. As scary as starting over could be, it’s one of the most exciting feelings you can experience. Your poetry is so simple yet so in depth. Anyone and everyone can relate, and that’s the beauty.
Liane Schmidt on Sep 25, 2008
I love this Josey, so beautiful* especially this line:

And for dusting off the gem

So lovely*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
lynn high on Sep 25, 2008
Beautiful work once again
Marathongman on Sep 25, 2008
Very nice
loafer on Sep 26, 2008
Wonderfully beautiful!
mdegenhardt on Sep 26, 2008
The read of this or rather the flow is perfect as the rhyme is dead on. The subject is clear as you give thanks to another for lifting you, your spirits, providing a new beginning. Very well written. Michael
G. Grissom on Sep 27, 2008
Again, you have managed to make me feel as you felt when you wrote your piece. Excellent job. Keep it up!!
R.B. Parsley on Sep 27, 2008
Josey,
Beautiful words from a beautiful lady!!! Your rhyme was absolute perfection. I love reading your poetry. I read this one three times!!!! Very, very good. Keep up the great work Josey.

Randy
Roger on Sep 28, 2008
A very nice poem.
BC Doan on Oct 3, 2008
very sweet poem!
Tmrobotix on Oct 10, 2008
Very good poem, I loved it!
Will Gray on Oct 13, 2008
Beautiful writing. Very good!
Melody on Oct 24, 2008
Oh I really love this one…sounds like what I want to feel like one day soon.

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