Newlyweds

Atanacio on Jan 5, 2010

Tags: Atanacio, drama, Fight, Life, marriage, newlyweds

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Just married…

It was an argument,

perhaps a fight,

she awoke after a restless night,

tendrils of hair

stuck to her cheek,

tears of fear

would actually peek,

her curls matted

on one side of her head,

then she realized he had never come to bed,

reaching for her pillow,

she prayed it had been,

only fear,

caused by a terrible nightmare.

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Comments (13)

AlmaG on Jan 5, 2010
That was truly beautiful.
Debra. on Jan 5, 2010
Nightmares can seem so real. Nice write!
drelayaraja on Jan 5, 2010
Great poem
albert1jemi on Jan 5, 2010
nice poem
Anuradha Ramkumar on Jan 5, 2010
Good one. Just a nightmare?
Lady Sunshine on Jan 5, 2010
Is it only a nightmare? You expressed her fear and sorrow well, Frank.
alc on Jan 5, 2010
What a great write! Thanks for the share Frank!
qasimdharamsy on Jan 6, 2010
Nice piece…well written…
yes me on Jan 9, 2010
Nightmares come in all guises…. liked it Frank
Sammy2000 on Jan 9, 2010
I guess all newly weds fear of being left alone huh
ladydryle on Jan 12, 2010
nightmares is really scary, and it feels scarier when you wake up from a nightmare without no one to turn to…because you’re alone.
LoveDoctor on Feb 17, 2010
Thank God it was only a nightmare. lol:)

If this happened in real life, that’s the last time my husband would hear from me.
LoveDoctor on Feb 17, 2010
but I am not married.

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