A rhyme about a love making time…

Nice and Slow

(adult rhyme)

Twelve o’clock midnight

We talked over candlelight

No one to disturb us, so the mood is just right

It’s her and me in the dark listening to R&B

I nibble on her ear, she softly call’s me baby

The temperature is rising our body’s getting tense

She takes off everything and then begins suspense

I rip off everything I wear rub my fingers through her hair

Seconds go by then ooh … I’m In there

Were moving back and fourth of course

The thrill is in the air without taking a lost

Yeah the attention’s overwhelming I’m fulfilling desire

Intertwine and combine set her soul on fire.

She’s got to understand that I’m a real man

Work it hard as I can and do it over again

Just thought I’d tell you how this all should go

Because I’m sure that there’s somebody out there who didn’t know

The way to move the way to grove the way to handle it

Turn out all the lights and only leave a candle lit

So when the mood is right, do what you got to do

Start wearing out that body like a tennis shoe…

Please don’t make haste with pace

See guys you cant waist, a single minute

Soon as your in it.

Make sure you attack till she don’t know how to act

And at the time you wont notice all the scars on you back

Touch, lick, push, hit, shove

Just simple directions on the perfection of making love

The simple slip, slide, glide upon the sheets

Never seize to tease, and don’t skip a beat

Straight up devotion for body’s in motion

Sticking to her body like lotion

Rub you up and rub you down leave a letter by your bed

Telling next time I’ll be in town

Until we meet again and next time you’ll know

That your going through the whole night

Nice & Slow.

By Vincent Eggleston Jr.

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Comments (7)
  • LovelyWolf on Nov 17, 2009

    Wow, leaves ya a little hot under the collar. Good work!

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 19, 2009

    Start wearing out that body like a tennis shoe… Love the imagery. great poem. wow!

  • Peter Cimino on Nov 20, 2009

    WOW…awesome. You can definitely see and feel it.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 21, 2009

    Great piece of work.

  • mkd1788 on Nov 23, 2009

    great man… i really enjoyed this..

  • diamondpoet on Nov 24, 2009

    Good write, nice flow.

  • Linda Lori on Nov 25, 2009

    Hot!!

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