Revenge, jealousy is the ammunition for the love. Let be a flood of words and try to chain beautifully.

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Night  gripped too strong
for mired in the dark
fused with black
The wounds fester
rancidness lie
like tongue of flame
to stander love
heart burn with blind
Inside the hall there was no lantern
to joke with the moon every night

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  • Thespeakman on Apr 4, 2011

    I think that was good – I don’t get poetry

  • smidggy on Apr 4, 2011

    Intense! Thanks for sharing!

  • Roe2115 on Apr 4, 2011

    Very intense!

  • perezz on Apr 4, 2011

    I was very encouraged to find this site. I wanted to thank you for this special read. I definitely savored every little bit of it and I have you bookmarked to check out new stuff you post.
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  • galore on Apr 4, 2011

    nice read, very hard to understand

  • papaleng on Apr 4, 2011

    a very powerful one!

  • iva75cpb on Apr 6, 2011

    Oh, nice!

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