Nightingale

sandcastle on Aug 21, 2010

Tags: Moonlit, nightingale song, singing nightingale, soul defying

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Nightingale ~ A Haiku.

Moonlit night
the nightingale sings
defying yet softening the soul

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Ethics0006 on Aug 21, 2010
Nice Work
John Cornor on Aug 22, 2010
cute and nice…hehe
John Cornor on Aug 22, 2010
cute and nice.hehe
Likha on Aug 22, 2010
I love the sound of the nightingale.. a great inspiration to write a beautiful haiku like this one. Keep going sandcastle.
Rhodora Bande on Aug 22, 2010
Brilliant! I love how you managed to use alliteration in this short piece: the singing and the softening of the soul. Wow!
bryeunade on Aug 22, 2010
I like being close to nature nakaka relax talaga. Thanks for sharing sandcastle..
Christine Ramsay on Aug 22, 2010
A lovely piece. There is nothing like the sounds of nature to help you relax.

Christine
Yalonda on Aug 22, 2010
This is so peaceful and relaxing!
giftarist on Aug 22, 2010
Simply beautiful. Liked it!
buenavida on Aug 23, 2010
Beautiful, we should all listen to nightingales more often..!:)
T. S. GARP on Aug 25, 2010
Short and sweet!
AJ Garcia on Aug 25, 2010
Beautiful! Parang katabi ko lang yung nightingale…
sandcastle on Aug 31, 2010
Thanks everyone. I am glad you all felt relaxed with the nightingale’s song, even just for a moment. Thanks for taking the time to leave your comments!

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