Wow, infidelity is a sore subject. Great post!

This isn’t a poem about infidelity Dave. However, I appreciate your comments.

Thanks

It’s amazing how people read there own hurts into other writer’s work. hahaha But, I guess I am assuming.

I can see this from many perspectives.

I can taste this. It tastes bitter sweet.

This, to me, is a kind of a sweet pain. I like the way you used alliteration and parallelisms in this piece.

I read pain, hurt, lack of being understood, a deep and profound love and need for intervention in the way of outside counseling for unbiased and unemotional advice. Am I reading right? The poetry, by the way, is so stirring and moving it does cause one to ponder over past love(s).

Nice poetry, with strong emotional self expression, very deep.

Seems like you have relayed a very emotional story in that poem.

A nice poem. I like it.

great work beautifully written

I enjoyed your poem – sometimes we can neither live with nor without each other

Thank you everyone for commenting. Your words reflect astute observations and great perceptiveness.

@elnavann truer words were NEVER spoken.

Rhythm and style Triond’s Poet Laureate has gone completely wild! Bravo and two thumbs up.

This is deep – whenever I read such poems that you I write, I hope and pray that God heals your heart.

May you find complete peace within you.

Take Care.

I think you said it all beautifully. It’s the way of love.

Thanks you guys!

…My goodness, this is the strongest poem I have read in many days. What expression. You are gifted. Thank you.

Thanks sincerely Quiet Voice

Only those we truly care about can send us on such an emotional rollercoaster. Good poetry, I enjoyed reading.

This is true Lynn, thanks for weighing in.