Where there’s light there’s hope.

Even though all looks lost, devoid of all vitality
Even though not a sound stirs, no verve no energy
No more the sound of children laughing
No more the sound of babys crying
The rocking chair rocks no more
There are holes in the ceiling and holes in the floor
As long as theres light, to breath, to ignite
Hope will revive, all will come alive
Never except the end, there is no beginning
No losing or winning
Hold on to your goal never let go
Never accept the status quo
Copyrightcopyright4..johnnydod 2010

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  • drelayaraja on Aug 28, 2010

    Great one Johny :)

  • Ethics0006 on Aug 28, 2010

    Good Job

  • Kathleen Murphy on Aug 28, 2010

    I love it! It made me feel the desperation, but then took me from that to hope. It painted a vivid picture and I think that made the end even more effective.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Aug 29, 2010

    So true. Great encouragement here. Thanks.

  • Kaye TM on Aug 29, 2010

    nice one! =p liked it!

  • mkd1788 on Aug 30, 2010

    i like pic that you have included..awesome..i saved this to make model in maya…great stuff i got today..

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