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You have left me all alone for way to long,

and it’s hard to understand your reason why.

Like a cliche in some old forgotten song.

Was it me or did you find some other guy?

I think we could have worked it out.

That we had what it would take.

To be the couple people talk about.

But I guess that’s my mistake.

You left without a single word goodbye.

No note to let me know where you have gone.

I wish that you’d give us another try.

Yet I have to face the truth that I’m alone.

Why, damn it why couldn’t you tell me.

You said that our love would never die.

Here I am standing where you used to be,

And with my arms holding nothing I cry.

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  • David Cartier on Dec 23, 2010

    Man o man yuo’s a good ol poem writer,

  • ceegirl on Dec 23, 2010

    There’s no good-bye, it’s always see you later.

  • Paul Roberts on Dec 23, 2010

    Sounds like an old one I wrote..and as I was told.. there are no good goodbeyes. Makes for some awsome heartbreak poems though. Merry Christmas.

  • Yovita Siswati on Dec 23, 2010

    Heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • bojijake on Dec 23, 2010

    u really like poetry, ur good at it haha

  • Suni51 on Dec 23, 2010

    Yes no good bye, Cheers, see you again. Why good bye?

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 23, 2010

    Touching!!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • UncleSammy on Jan 7, 2011

    nice share, see around

  • Likha on Jan 8, 2011

    Smile FJ, it’s still a beautiful world!

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