Look with mmm.

I did not I shall not

What! what are you

Me! I am me 

I am.

Please do not be mist-rued

To think I think the same as you

I am a man for awe that

 BUT!

First and fore most I am

Who you wish me to be

If you wish! I’ll write you

Rhymes with fish

But!

Then again I may just wish

To give the word the way I wish.

For am I not O’ mortal flesh

To question though unwisely

Awe tae look upon yer flesh

Wi ma ain een an ner see

Yon scars O’ lo’s ain whars

Awe dina sae I gi up

For lo ma sweet an only.

……………….

For am I not of mortal flesh to question though unwisely

Oh to look upon your fleash with my own eyes and never see

Your scars of loves own wars, Oh don’t say I give up

For love my sweet and only.

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Comments (12)
  • joyhyena29 on Mar 28, 2010

    well done^^

  • ceegirl on Mar 28, 2010

    love the work

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 28, 2010

    A very good one. I love it.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 29, 2010

    I love the way you write. My hubby’s a Scot too.

    Christine

  • lillyrose on Mar 29, 2010

    Love you for who you are… great poem

  • qasimdharamsy on Mar 29, 2010

    Very nice one….

  • athena goodlight on Mar 29, 2010

    another nice poem from you.

  • Atanacio on Mar 29, 2010

    You sir have the knack for this craft :)

  • diamondpoet on Mar 29, 2010

    Clever and very orignal piece.

  • diamondpoet on Mar 29, 2010

    Very creative and clever piece.

  • bailieman on Mar 29, 2010

    The romantic and the Scot cannot stay hidden for long.

  • giftarist on Mar 29, 2010

    I find this awesome. ^_^

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