No Light

Will Gray on Nov 4, 2009

A poem about life.

No Light

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I have a candle with no flame,

I only have myself to blame,

I want to run away and hide,

I lost the light that was deep inside.

I cannot see beyond the door,

Crying, my eyes are so sore,

Color me black as ebony,

No more future waits for me.

Circles on a wall that screams,

Filling all my hopeless dreams,

Chanting demons all around,

I begin to like their sound.

All the light in life is gone,

I don’t know if I can carry on,

Nothing ever felt so cruel,

Satan and God had their duel.

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Goodselfme on Nov 4, 2009
Your dispair expressed here also shows your strenght to carry on and valiantly succeed over the lack of light. Your light always shines through.It is the hard times that makes us so much stronger.
Sheila M on Nov 4, 2009
No matter how sad, it’s nice to know I’m not alone when really I feel it’s so…..lovely work
lillyrose on Nov 4, 2009
Great poem, you got right down to the core! very emotional!
Snooky on Nov 4, 2009
smooth and moving nice and tight
You got the message and the rythum flowing just right
I feel it I like it I love it Marvelous

And that illastration is dispair personified
Jane Jane on Nov 5, 2009
full of emotions and nice use of words.

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