No Longer Human

Darla Cooke on Nov 4, 2009

Tags: blood, creature of the night, darkness, Demon, vampire

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A scary poem.

Image via Wikipedia

He’s no longer consider human,

he’s a creature of the night.

He lives in a world of darkness,

forever thirsting for human blood.

He’s powerful and deadly,

a savage preying on mankind.

He’s lost his heart and soul,

always to live life as a demon.

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Comments (18)

Judi Eddy on Nov 4, 2009
Good. from the dark side.
cardy on Nov 4, 2009
Oh nice work loved this well written!!
ashan1614 on Nov 4, 2009
Nice write, Darla!
Ramalingam on Nov 4, 2009
Nicely written with opt image.Thank you
raman13 on Nov 4, 2009
excellent
Themax on Nov 4, 2009
Really very deep thoughts thank you !!!!
lillyrose on Nov 4, 2009
You are so good at these!
diamondpoet on Nov 4, 2009
Great pic makes me think of the hulk, thanks for sharing.
Goodselfme on Nov 4, 2009
Your expressive words create an appropriate picture.TX
alc on Nov 4, 2009
Ooh! I loved it!
STEVE666 on Nov 4, 2009
Scary!!
Jamie Myles on Nov 4, 2009
Very dark! Well writen. I agree with Lillyrose,you are so good at these.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 4, 2009
That is an impressive piece. Well done.

Christine
Linda Lori on Nov 4, 2009
Chilling!
Milton H Peebles III on Nov 4, 2009
good one
Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
ken bultman on Nov 4, 2009
What a guy.
giftarist on Nov 5, 2009
Creepy!
Aiyanna on Nov 8, 2009
Very descriptive

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