A refuge a man can find when a woman enters his life even for just a short time.

Too petite in the
Scorching heat, dirty-
Blond sand and a grain
In her eyes. Creating
Oasis only to survive.
Baby blue mixed with
The moon, lonely man arrives.

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Comments (5)
  • gabbic1219 on Oct 15, 2008

    lovely…short and sweet w/ great depth!!

  • Allison Jae on Oct 15, 2008

    Short, but still dark and eerie. You really know what I like. Great job. Post more soon.

  • poetic enigma on Nov 6, 2008

    short, but still a terrific write

  • goodselfme on Nov 26, 2008

    button not working to say I like it very much

  • ShadowPsychos on Jun 17, 2010

    wow…brilliant. you are great with words very talented :)

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