short, yet beautiful. nice job.

Kittymmeow – thank you for your comment, I appreciate them :O)

I liked this one,enough too understand the feeling

Great poem, the words embody stress and emotional pain perfectly. I’m only 16, but unfortunately the events that life has handed out to me have led me through similar feelings and I know what you’re talking about. Good job, keep up the good work.

Thanks Stewart. I’m sorry to hear you have had some bad times. I’ve read some of your stuff and you write well. Writing can be therapeutic. Keep writing, keep looking forward and stay strong :O)

Gets to us all at times, good work

Good poem, direct and to the point.