During the time of suicide.

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His eyes rose

to meet an angry God,

his failure shows,

as he felt he was shriveling into death,

his last breath,

weak,

forgiveness he did not seek,

then his life, taken,

no mistaken,

he parted his lips,

no sound came,

madness, then shame,

as God called his name,

too late,

he cries,

then dies.

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Comments (4)
  • dottie on Mar 16, 2009

    so sad wow :(

  • Karey on Mar 16, 2009

    how terribly portaryaed ouch!

  • Halfcis on Mar 17, 2009

    terrible picture great poetry

  • Mentor on Apr 4, 2009

    strong write of suicide

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