Role models.

things seem difficult
and i want give up
pushing people away that care
cause i feel like they dont
even when i know they do
two stars
im supposed to look up to
one with blurred vision
because lack of sobriety
the other who trys
coughing with one lung
hoping these stars will shine down
on me and help me understand
but they dont know me
they dont understand what i’m going through
so how can they help me
when they cant help themselves?

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  • skylite on May 6, 2009

    Nice poem but remember to never give up because somewhere there is always someone who cares and someone is has the ability to help :)

  • berrynice on May 6, 2009

    I like the poem, especially the last two lines but it is a sad poem!

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