Say no to smoking. This is just an opinion, I didn’t mean to offend smokers but encourages you to stop smoking.

Why do men love smoking?

Is it for image building?

They call it adding masculinity

But I tell you, it’s stupidity.

**

Somehow I wonder why?

Smoking addiction’s very high.

Don’t you know that cigars kill?

Stop now and start to heal.

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  • sexy sunshine143 on Sep 20, 2009

    great work.

  • Leonardo davinci Evans on Sep 20, 2009

    In every age there are rites to expressing our psychological desire to be seen as independent. Usually this takes the form of being anti- the current norm. It is a time when the individual is vunerable to peer pressure to be anti- and cool, just like his peers.

  • Leonardo davinci Evans on Sep 20, 2009

    In every age there are rites to expressing our psychological desire to be seen as independent. Usually this takes the form of being anti- the current norm. It is a time when the individual is vunerable to peer pressure to be anti- and cool just like his peers.

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Sep 20, 2009

    Good write.

  • sandie on Sep 20, 2009

    i wish that everybody would quit as its a really bad habit and they can live longer, not being disrespectful to them.Nice topic, thanks for sharing.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Sep 20, 2009

    Easier said than done, I quit about 12 years ago, and it was one of the hardest things I ever had to do.
    Most start smoking due to peer pressure the need to be accepted.
    Great topic

  • ceegirl on Sep 20, 2009

    I never like smokers.

  • MySoldiersSweetheart on Sep 20, 2009

    I smoke, i dont have nothing against this but good stuff

  • Mystify on Sep 20, 2009

    I am a smoker and this is a great motivational write,liked your ending passage!

  • Papa Sparks on Sep 20, 2009

    I quit two years and feel great!

  • Papa Sparks on Sep 20, 2009

    Oops…quit two years ago

  • chitragopi on Sep 20, 2009

    Good poem to create awareness

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 20, 2009

    Great poem, I agree 100%!!!!!!!!!!

  • papaleng on Sep 21, 2009

    never mind the bad effect of smoking to active smokers but what we should be concern is the effect of smoking to passive smokers.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Sep 21, 2009

    I quit smoking when I was 13 yrs old.
    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • Diziette on Sep 21, 2009

    I am sticking this up where my son iln law can read it. Very good.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 21, 2009

    I totally agree with you. It seems however that more and more women are taking up smoking, particularly young women. I can’t understand it as I was never tempted to smoke. Good work.

    Christine

  • mishee on Sep 21, 2009

    right. not only men, some women too, and even teenagers. nice poem .:)

  • Literati on Sep 21, 2009

    Yah, the poem is like, pardon me for the term, stereotyping.
    But anyway, still a good poem.
    :)

  • Lady Sunshine on Sep 21, 2009

    There are NO benefits to smoking. Most people start as kids and continue on to adulthood. And women smoke, too. lol

  • Marie Milton on Sep 21, 2009

    I never have and *fingers crossed) never will. An important subject made into a poem…nice one : )

  • Will Gray on Sep 21, 2009

    Great! Spread the news!

  • JerseyXhales Art on Sep 21, 2009

    hmm i don’t smoke cigars but i do smoke cigarettes..not offending at all though. nicely written

  • CA Johnson on Sep 22, 2009

    I enjoyed your poem. Smoking is so bad for you and I hope that people do stop smoking for their health and the health of their loved ones.

  • Carolyn Cordon on Sep 23, 2009

    It’s sad that many more women than ever are taking up smoking. They want to be able to die young just like men do! How stupid is that?

  • Webiny on Sep 29, 2009

    Nice poem. Short and to the point, but there’s a really powerful message in there. Food for thought.

  • Lee Ness on Oct 2, 2009

    Yes, excellent.. I always wonder that too about smoking.
    I do not smoke… but a lot guys I have met on meet and greets
    do smoke…
    Lee Ness
    http://telewatcher.com/reality/project-runway-season-6-episode-4/

  • Monica Romano Penaloza on Oct 6, 2009

    I’m with you on that I don’t understand Y people smoke. My mom smokes and my X does too and I’m the one that gets bronquitis all of the time and both of my kids got ashma! =- [

  • Teves on Oct 15, 2009

    Cigarette smoking is dangerous to your kids…SO DON’T SMOKE…….

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