But me:)

I.

Please don’t cry
Face the world with a smile
Even just for a while
Come on, won’t you try?

II.
Don’t you be selfish?
Share your life with the rest
Open your heart
Let me show you the start

III.
Leave your sadness and gloom
You’re born to be happy
If you think nobody loves you
Then call me NOBODY

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  • Papa Sparks on Sep 12, 2009

    This was very nice. Thanks for sharing.

  • xoxo on Sep 12, 2009

    I’m a nobody too. Lovely piece. Thank you :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 12, 2009

    A good piece. I particularly like the last two lines. Well done.

    Christine

  • fragile18 on Sep 12, 2009

    hi, my name is nobody too. want to dance with me? nyahaha. :)

  • papaleng on Sep 12, 2009

    It is good to be nobody than pretending to be somebody. Remember god loves people who are humble. Musta na ‘anak’? miss you.

  • Goodselfme on Sep 12, 2009

    Well written with a nice flow, great message and fine word selection.

  • rizzei on Sep 13, 2009

    yeepeee:) thanks thanks!! i miss the people clsoe to my heart here in Triond..muah!!:)

  • Francois Hagnere on Sep 13, 2009

    That is so beautiful, bravo Rizzei!

  • Lostash on Sep 13, 2009

    We are all a nobody to somebody. Nice piece!

  • Penggaroo on Sep 16, 2009

    The ending’s cute ;)

  • lara on Sep 21, 2009

    to be a nobody is to be a somebody someday..

  • CA Johnson on Sep 22, 2009

    I loved it! You really did a great job with this one!

  • CutestPrincess on Oct 2, 2009

    what a nice piece… nice flow!

  • Will Gray on Oct 2, 2009

    Beautiful and well done!

  • chantell on Oct 4, 2009

    That was Beautiful. I really liked it.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Oct 5, 2009

    Nice play on the word nobody…..but you are certainly somebody.

  • tasha kazuki on Dec 4, 2009

    Nice poem. Very creative.

  • Cynthia Cox on Mar 25, 2010

    good one:)

  • ken bultman on Apr 21, 2010

    Thanks for being nobody.

  • fragile18 on May 23, 2010

    :)

  • daintylad on May 27, 2010

    if you’ll be that nobody then you’ll be a somebody for that person.. haha..so touching

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