He was always there….

Blinded, can’t find your way

Thinking, you have come this far by yourself

Did you not know, you were never alone

When it seems you were standing alone

He never left your side

He was your shelter

You were always wrapped in his arms

He gently set you down

smiled into your eyes

And now you see

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  • pattiann on Sep 8, 2011

    Beautiful

  • FX777222999 on Sep 8, 2011

    I felt your poem; beautiful and hope resides within your lines.

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 8, 2011

    Inspiring work, Shirley.

  • Farzeela Fee Faisal on Sep 9, 2011

    The picture is beautiful, so is your poem

  • Lady Sunshine on Sep 9, 2011

    Yes, he is always there. Such a beautiful piece that inspires hope, Shirley. Loved how you constructed this: you begin with “Blinded” and end with “see”.

  • Tulan on Sep 9, 2011

    Nobody told me the road would be easy, and they didn’t tell me it would be this hard, either. good poem.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Oct 2, 2011

    Beautiful poem. Breathtaking picture.

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