Loud Poem.

Crowd making noise
to make peace
took out Very loud noise
so you’ll be the lord of peace.
People standing in the dark
Keep the promise of light
Compliments  will continue to read the ballads,
People will forget their problems
Then no one will see your side
When really be lighting the lamp.

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Comments (4)
  • Raj the Tora on Sep 12, 2010

    great piece of work. Keep it up

  • shivedi on Sep 12, 2010

    Thanks Raj

  • Noeal V on Sep 13, 2010

    Nice Share.

  • shivedi on Sep 13, 2010

    Thanks Noeal

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