Ah, young love!

There once was a couple from Maine

Who hollered like moose in great pain.

When their marriage had mellowed,

They no longer bellowed

And looked on young love with disdain.

Image credit: “Moose, Superior National Forest, Minnesota, USA” by USDA Forest Service [Public Domain] via Wikipedia

This limerick is a response to “Talk About Extreme Sex (Limerick)” by Martin Kloess.  Thanks for inspiring me!

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  • Margaret Boseroy on Aug 15, 2012

    Young love indeed…

  • Jswana on Aug 15, 2012

    How beautiful, funny and unique. I love it. :)

  • Martin Kloess on Aug 15, 2012

    Well written. Thank you.

  • herjave01 on Aug 18, 2012

    Haha! :D

  • gaby7 on Aug 18, 2012

    A nice one here friend! Its a fact that the older you grow, the more inclined you are to look on young love with disdain, although the reverse is true for some people!

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