A short poem, written on a long night.

Staring, longing, burnt night,

Where has my time come to pass?

Singing and drinking,

Toasting fluorescent dreams,

Despairing, lonesome, an empty glass,

Thoughts juxtaposed, united, ethereal,

Friends have come and gone,

Dew in the morning sun,

How fluorescent dreams come to pass,

When chasing the sunrise.

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  • alc on Oct 25, 2009

    An enjoyable read for sure! Hopefully you will publish more articles soon! Thanks for the share!

  • johnnydod on Oct 25, 2009

    Interesting

  • raptor22 on Oct 28, 2009

    It’s different.

  • martie on Oct 29, 2009

    interesting indeed!

  • Drew Diligence on Oct 29, 2009

    Utter crap!

  • diamondpoet on Oct 30, 2009

    Excellent a new writer is born, I really liked. Don’t pay drew diligence any mind he says the same about everyone work. He is just a poor mis-guided soul.

  • V rank on Nov 9, 2009

    Welcome to Triond…! Looking forward for your future articles… Good Luck…

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