Not all beauty is lovely.

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One fine afternoon, I saw a fair rose blossom,
And intended to pick it in at the crack of dawn;
Morning came, so I went excited to my lawn,
And at far, I saw it so fair in pompous bloom.
So I raced my steps for an anxious picking;
Its beauty I wholly and voraciously claimed,
And gave it the world’s sweetest caressing;
Until I saw an ugly worm inside it, creeping.
In sullen dismay, I hurled it into a deep pit,
So in its gloomy world none will ever see it,
As if this fair rose never walked the earth,
And in deafening oblivion, it will slowly wilt.
A dirty scavenger saw the red rose though,
It was still aromatic and delighted the fellow
But the creeping ugly worm, he at once saw;
The red rose, quickly and bluntly, he threw.

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  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 8, 2009

    The pic is sooo nice, bro!

  • CutestPrincess on Jan 8, 2009

    what a lovely roses! i love the picture!

  • The Quail on Jan 8, 2009

    awesome pic

  • lindalulu on Jan 8, 2009

    Very nice.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 8, 2009

    I really enjoyed that. It is such a shame it was not what it seemed.

    Christine

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 8, 2009

    so true,lumalabas na ang pagka-poet m bro a,keep on

  • MJPatrick on Jan 8, 2009

    I didn’t want to end, I think its fantastic.

  • Liane Schmidt on Jan 8, 2009

    Interesting, unique work – it’s memorable.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • neelam pandey on Jan 8, 2009

    The idea of the poem is unique in itself…nice expression…and the title of the poem can be applied to our general life as well.

  • Unofre Pili on Jan 8, 2009

    Thanks everyone. Yes, Neelam, that red rose is a human being.

  • papaleng on Jan 9, 2009

    wow! something a really admire a rose and a beautiful poem. I like it much Bro..

  • Jasin on Jan 9, 2009

    Wow! very well done, lovethe words you used.

  • Eunice Tan on Jan 9, 2009

    The red color of your rose is lovely!

  • MMV Abad on Jan 9, 2009

    Beauty can be deceiving. Love your photo, my friend and of course, your poem. Madalang ata to :)

  • LindenMarie on Jan 9, 2009

    I prefer to cure the illness before throwing the beautiful rose away

  • Cheryl Sills on Jan 9, 2009

    Sad poem. Good writing. Interesting observation. Pretty photo.

  • Chris Stonecipher on Jan 9, 2009

    Great poem. It took me a second to figure out you were talking about human life. That is what made the poem great. Your work is always enjoyable.

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 9, 2009

    Ah the prick of the thorn from a beautiful rose, a lesson in life is hard to learn. Nice work.

  • Juancav on Jan 9, 2009

    Roses anyways are pricking.

  • Majic on Jan 11, 2009

    Lovely poetry! I thought there was a bit of politics in it though. I hope not! Keep it up!

  • Unofre Pili on Jan 11, 2009

    Thanks everyone. Yes, Majic, that can be an alternative interpretation of this piece, but I really intended it to women (red rose) who have been careless, and were easily duped by so called faithful lovers (worms in this poem).

  • Patrick Bernauw on Jan 12, 2009

    Very nice!… The poem is talking in symbols… or like fairy tales do. It’s very allegorical! Love it!

  • Mystical Whitewolf on Jan 12, 2009

    Beautiful Rose………..nice poem…..

  • eddiego65 on Jan 13, 2009

    Beautiful pic. Really nice poem! I like it!

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Jan 16, 2009

    Great shot, and what a nice poem.

  • Toni Sellaro on Jan 30, 2009

    Nice poem and beautiful photo too!

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 7, 2009

    I really like this poem, gorgeous photo

  • rutherfranc on May 12, 2009

    two thumbs up!

  • Allison Jae on Jun 6, 2009

    Great poem, and I love the photo too.

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